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Beautiful
Contributed by
norticus
on
Friday, 9th August 2002 @ 06:21:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Beautiful
You’re beautiful; that’s what you are.
You are my sun, my moon, my shining star.
You are a mother loving a child.
You are a painter creating a smile.
You are a doe at a gurgling stream.
You are a little girl licking daddy’s ice cream.
You are a sunbeam dividing the clouds.
You are a sparrow looking down on the crowds.
You are my lover returning from afar.
You’re beautiful; that’s what you are.
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norticus
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2002-08-09 06:21:38]
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Re: Beautiful
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by Suzy on
Friday, 9th August 2002 @ 06:36:50 PM AEST
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Awww this is sweet...sounds like Candice is one lucky lady..
Lasca |
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Re: Beautiful
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 10th August 2002 @ 11:00:59 PM AEST
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This is beautiful... as the title entails
Great write...
Daniela |
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Re: Beautiful
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by Kiz on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 08:22:01 PM AEST
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| I like the "sunbeam" line...very origianl. Not as good as i expected, but neverthe less..has to be said, candicee is very lucky. On kiz's scale: 2.5 |
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Re: Beautiful
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 03:03:57 AM AEST
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Dearest Norticus @-<-<<-
Beautifully written and so Charming!
Your friend always Nessa |
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Re: Beautiful
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by JamesHowlett on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 10:44:56 AM AEST
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Very nice. You must really care about Candice.
-James |
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