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Endless rain
Contributed by
whywhy
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Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
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Endless rain
streaming down the window
the coolness of the glass
embraces my pain - extinguishes the thoughts
which burn me from inside
Endless rain
My fingers glide over the glossy surface
although able to see
still unable to touch
those quivering tears
Endless rain
wetting my face
- over and over –
wetting my clothes
dripping on the floor
Endless rain
An ocean of cries drowns my soul within me
Sometimes the ebb-tide may dry the ground
but then the flood-tide will always return
and Endless rain will be streaming down again.
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Re: Endless rain
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 08:44:19 PM AEST
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well written
Shari |
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Re: Endless rain
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by venkat on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 07:03:57 AM AEST
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| Well done..especially last stanza..very touching. venkat |
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Re: Endless rain
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by Wrybod on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 07:11:32 AM AEST
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| Very evocative |
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Re: Endless rain
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by wyrd_faerie on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 02:58:24 PM AEST
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| ah...beautiful...i will remember your words... |
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Re: Endless rain
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 06:12:10 AM AEST
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If only rain could revive the soul.
Beautifully written was an enlightening write. |
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