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The Music Of You...
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
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Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 07:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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As wonderful and captivating as I know it was,
I can't recall the last time you kissed me
It's been so long since your breath has caressed my skin
And your velvet whispers have faded.....
Leaving soft imprints on my mind
Like faded ink on paper
So warm your embrace,although it has loosened
With closed eyes,I try and recapture closer moments
Yet the miles of old seem further,greater than before
And your touch has drifted.....
Leaving a cold spot on my body
Like winter delivering its kiss
The gentle sighs you painted upon my lips
Still linger and escape my mouth,an orchestra of emotion
Symphonic bliss to dream of you,feel you in my heart
And the melody will remain...
Leaving me energised and fresh
Like the way you bring to life,my soul
Copyright ©
LovingWhispers
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2003-07-05 19:05:00]
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Re: The Music Of You...
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 07:43:58 PM AEST
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a rhapsody of words floating across the page
well written
Shari |
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Re: The Music Of You...
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by Crow on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 11:45:00 AM AEST
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you paint beautiful pictures, you know that.
just a treat to read. Crow
a friend and i sat down with guitars and put a little music to "lost in silence" hope you don`t mind, just a few lines.your words are great!
made the girls cry. asked me where i got it!
they know i can`t write that sensitive.
i think thats the word that expresses my
thoughts best. Crow |
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Re: The Music Of You...
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 12:24:09 PM AEST
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| dearest sharon this is a most beautiful poem, wow, stunning and lovely, great line; "Yet the miles of old seem further" this whole write is so excellent, i love it, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The Music Of You...
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 01:33:58 AM AEST
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| Oh how I love this! One of your few poems without rhyme that I have read and it is beautiful... Jan |
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