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night sky high
Contributed by
vincy
on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 02:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
scifi
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A falling star
shooting past
undetected
so far.
Can you catch
with your eyes
the tail end
of the dust
particles
spreading
backwards in time?
Over there
the remnants
of the once supernova
a wild comet
destination oblivion
shooting fast
shooting past
your weary eyes.
Catch... a glance
of light
in your sight
press the shutter
freeze the frame
hold this moment
seal the time
before it fades.
Copyright ©
vincy
... [
2003-07-05 14:35:00]
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Re: night sky high
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 06:54:10 PM AEST
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| beautiful:) |
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Re: night sky high
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 08:03:47 PM AEST
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great write
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Re: night sky high
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by shelby on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 01:43:06 AM AEST
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beautiful poem I to love to watch the night sky
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Re: night sky high
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by norm on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 10:45:14 AM AEST
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I love the thought of time standing still...
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How can you take a picture of time,
No less, set the action as you did in rhyme,
with earth spinning fast
and spinning sublime
Everything's gone with a flip of a dime... |
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