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Friendship
Contributed by
Snakewriter
on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 12:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Love and hate.
We think
them opposite,
yet fact is
they are the same.
Two sides of
the same coin.
Two shades of,
the same emotion.
One dark,
the other light.
Proof -
lay only in this fact.
You cannot hate,
that which you have not loved.
A true friend,
someone who loves you.
Someone who
would do you
no wrong
But,
when friendship
goes bitter,
this is when love
turns to hate.
There is
no hate
greater than that
for one you have
once loved.
For only
someone you trusted,
someone you let inside,
can cut you so deep
for hate to grow.
So as I tear your
***** throat away.
Watch you bleed.
As I line in my sights
As I cut your heart out
as you have mine.
Remember, I will always love you.
Copyright ©
Snakewriter
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2003-07-05 12:35:00]
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Re: Friendship
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by nightrider on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 02:54:23 PM AEST
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| wow... there is nothing i can say to express how amazing this is to me... i know the kind of friendship, i know the kind of love... its not a fun thing, but hey, you got a great poem... |
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Re: Friendship
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by cryingonmyporch on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 05:51:28 PM AEST
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Friendships ending are a lot more painful than those who are in love sometimes. But unluckily for me my husband was not only my companion but my best friend. He betrayed me when i needed him most than lied and lied and lied. Yet he never did anything wrong. OR in his eyes it wasn't wrong. Your also right when you say that you can't hate something until you love it. I don't hate my husband and I pray that the child I bare doesn't hate him but he abandoned us so his fate with this child lies solely with him now. i really really loved this poem a great deal. it has been more inspiring than anything I have ever read. ( and at times that includes the bible) Keep writing this was rather quite enjoyable.
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Re: Friendship
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 08:12:02 PM AEST
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very well written although hate is a feeling I so far have not entertained
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Re: Friendship
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by shelby on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 01:28:19 AM AEST
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oh this is pure power and emotion here! Yes I know this well. The line is so fine we cross between the two.Great write
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Re: Friendship
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by mystical_illusion on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 04:34:51 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed ur poem very well put, feelings that i think everyone has felt and experienced sometime or another in their lifetime.
Your ending was very well done,
thanx for posting...
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