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Touch of Blood
Contributed by
InteruptedFate
on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 10:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Just one cup.
Just one sip.
Just one touch of blood.
The fear of death.
The stabbing pain.
Just one touch of blood.
Hands unclenching,
Pain unending.
Just one touch of blood.
Guilt must follow,
as a price.
Of what you've done,
This shameful night.
Just one touch of blood.
Copyright ©
InteruptedFate
... [
2003-07-05 10:05:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Touch of Blood
(User Rating: 1 ) by Calbob on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 01:37:47 PM AEST (User
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This poem kinda confused me. I read your authors notes and had a hard time seeing how they related to your poem. What is the "just one touch of blood"?
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Re: Touch of Blood
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ilhar on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 08:48:05 PM AEST (User
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your poem was well written
Shari |
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