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Poem of Past
Contributed by
InteruptedFate
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Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 09:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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Hidden past.
Free at last.
Burdens lay behind.
Troubled soul set free to go.
Time no longer passing slow.
And heart no longer blind.
Wind blown hair.
Unfaded air.
Worries not set free.
Ready for what comes her way.
Desire can no longer pay.
And tears drop, filled with glee.
Cloudy days,
Lye far away.
Conceptual concern.
Carefree of the sudden pain.
Thoughtful love to be obtained.
Yet much more she must learn.
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InteruptedFate
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2003-07-05 09:05:00]
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Re: Poem of Past
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 09:12:56 AM AEST
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i liked this very much
Shari |
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Re: Poem of Past
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by norm on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 09:32:07 AM AEST
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Your poem developes beautifully
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I wish you luck in finding
what will make you happy be,
I'd help you out myself but
I'm happily married, see...
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Re: Poem of Past
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by ziggy on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 10:00:49 AM AEST
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| Good write.... feels like an escape |
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Re: Poem of Past
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by blueheart on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 11:54:59 AM AEST
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| Good job, I enjoyed reading it. |
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Re: Poem of Past
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by Crow on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 02:23:17 PM AEST
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| how bright! and refreshing. very good work. Crow |
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Re: Poem of Past
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 01:53:05 AM AEST
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| Intriguing write ... I like the structure of the poem too ... well done .. .Jan |
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