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Twisted Life
Contributed by
blueheart
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Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 08:35:00 AM in AEST
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How did we start,
Till we hate,
With rage and hatered,
We communicate,
It took me so long,
But now I see,
That the one who ruined it,
Was actually me,
I want a new beginning,
I can't bear if we part,
For I know it's for my soul and mind,
But mostly it's for my heart.
Please accept me again,
For I'm hanging on a thread,
Don't increase the pain,
And leave my soul dead.
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blueheart
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2003-07-05 08:35:00]
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Re: Twisted Life
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 09:14:16 AM AEST
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very well written
Shari
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Re: Twisted Life
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by norm on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 09:35:41 AM AEST
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Well constructed poem
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you just ask him, nicely
and I hope that he agrees
not to leave you for another
and that you begin to please....
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Re: Twisted Life
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by Crow on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 10:56:26 AM AEST
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| so honest, good write. Crow |
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Re: Twisted Life
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 04:48:28 AM AEST
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| dearest hanna, your emotion well expressed, wishes, misses and much longing in this write, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Twisted Life
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by Ronald on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 04:46:19 AM AEST
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| Great poem! great to read something new from you |
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Re: Twisted Life
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by LovingWhispers on
Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 10:31:35 AM AEST
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| Oh my...so few words..yet straight from the heart. You ache...and I feel it.Well done! |
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