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Unknown Kindness
Contributed by
niceguysfinishlast
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Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 08:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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When the kindness is unknown
When the good deed is not shown
With trust of heart and gift of soul
The deed is greatly known
By those other than human
The great divinity above
Kept in heavens book
The deed of unknown kindness, the deed of unaware humility
The deed most dear among the good
Help to those with need, help to those with comprise
Love to those with humble approach, pity to those with boastful greed
The gift of body is overshadowed by the gift of intangibility
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2003-07-05 08:05:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Unknown Kindness
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ilhar on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 09:15:50 AM AEST (User
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truth at it greatest wisdom, great write
shari |
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Re: Unknown Kindness
(User Rating: 1 ) by norm on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 09:42:25 AM AEST (User
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Your poem is well made
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You can add on the fingers of your left ear
the people who will do for others for nil,
I'm telling you now and I'm telling you here,
Zip is the answer ..where send I, the bill? |
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Re: Unknown Kindness
(User Rating: 1 ) by blueheart on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 12:00:09 PM AEST (User
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Truly a great message behind this poem. |
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Re: Unknown Kindness
(User Rating: 1 ) by Crow on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 01:51:22 PM AEST (User
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a rare person indeed, i also like the message in this. Crow |
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Re: Unknown Kindness
(User Rating: 1 ) by desertwispers on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 02:04:03 PM AEST (User
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enjoyable poem with a great message |
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Re: Unknown Kindness
(User Rating: 1 ) by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 01:55:12 AM AEST (User
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Beautifully written ... I loved this... Jan |
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