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Contributed by
xraz0rx
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Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 05:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I hate the way i am
I hate the pain i feel
everything is changing
it feels as if it's not real
I'm dying and you know it
even if they say i'm OK
they don't know the pain inside
and they can't make it go away
My life is great,
well someparts it is
was i really that much of a mistake?
I believe that god hates us all
and he wishes i was never made
he just wanted the people around me to suffer
and feel all of my pain
god should die..
i don't think many will care
but if i die
damn.. there's a bunch of despair
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2003-07-05 05:35:00]
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Re: No Title
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by Suzy on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 05:36:55 AM AEST
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No one is a mistake we were all made for a reason..even if that reason is to be put here on earth to suffer..well anyhow this is a great poem..
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Re: No Title
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 05:51:12 AM AEST
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Your poem is good, your pain is real, but your view on God is not I feel. When in pain it sometimes is natural for some to strike out at God, but no one is a mistake
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Re: No Title
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by Alisialynn on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 01:06:56 AM AEST
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| God doesn't care. I feel you my man. Life sucks. Run away somewhere beautiful and ignore people or pretend your somebody else. Make the most out of it. Go to the Carribean and be a small boat captain. Or go there and start a drug ring. Make a movie out of your life. |
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