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good to know:
Contributed by
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 04:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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when i had no place to go ,you took me in.
when i had no food to eat, you feed me,
when i couldn't pay my bill,you help me.
when i was sick,you heal me.
when people call me names,you stayed with me.
when i lost my job,you were there.
you bin there for me.
o lord you bin there for me.
when friends run away,you took their place.
when the guns wore ame at me,they fall short.
when i go to school,you help me be cool.
when i was alone you comfort me.
o lord you bin good to me.
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2003-07-05 04:35:00]
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Re: good to know:
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 05:54:06 AM AEST
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yes it is good to know
Shari |
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Re: good to know:
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by vincy on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 10:23:30 PM AEST
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RICHARD!!! Haaalleluya brother you got a heart.
Just kiddin' friendly way, has an evangelical ring to it.
I am a spoken word performance artist myself
so I recognise promising performance pieces. |
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Re: good to know:
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 12:25:06 AM AEST
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| dearest richard, this to me is one of your very best:) i love that you wrote so from your heart and for what its worth in lower case, i do believe youve read my mind:) hugs n' love nessa |
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