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Broke through
Contributed by
SuicidalSon
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Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 01:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Words to the wise you are wrong
Look into the eyes of the strong
Smile as your God cries along
Laughing as we die we are gone
Watching from the safest place above
Grinning as the nameless faces shove
Pondering the chances of showing love
Preachers molesting children is enough
Followers of God I will break you
Have you heard my words did I break through
Followers of God He has broke you
Did you hear my words Have I broke through
Have you realized you are wrong
Following one man then you arent strong
Living around Him you cant belong
Believe in what you do and walk alone
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Re: Broke through
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 06:06:53 AM AEST
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although your poem is well written, the content for you may be right, to me I have broken through with my faith.
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Re: Broke through
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by SuicidalSon on
Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 03:24:21 PM AEST
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Your Faith leads to dissapointment my freind
think of things you have asked for help. Have you ever recieved any? When you pray for your sins does He say you are forgiven? Or do you just believe you have been? Its all one big question with no answers so tell my to waste my time. |
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