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Men Cry Too
Contributed by
The_Phantom
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Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 08:35:00 PM in AEST
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I sit silently on this plane, a hollow soul replaced by pain,
I close my eyes and visualize, the point of death, my own demise,
You can't sleep while filled with sarrow, feeling as if there's no tomarow,
Saying goodbye again, when will the misery end,
I try and put my life together but I have no glue,
If God exsist, I'd hire a lawyer and sue,
Give my little girl a kiss, tell how much she'll be missed,
Holding my wife in a deep embrace, fighting back emotions I dare not face,
Tears filling my eyes, closing them tightly I won't let myself cry,
This isn't the first time I've had to go,
It doesn't make it any easier, it still rips apart my soul,
I'm temporarly insane, recovering from a heart that's been slain,
Soldiers don't cry, we fight for our country and die,
I should be use to leaving my family,
On a momments notice, or the president finds it handy,
Visions of the past, bad desions that tend to last,
Grey clouds cover the sky, hurry up rain, hide the tears in my eyes,
The only thing that keeps you from me, is this puddle they call a sea,
30000 feet in the air, lost in time, like nobody cares,
Loneliness waiting until I'm with you, yeah baby.......Men cry too.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
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Re: Men Cry Too
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by ShadowsCloud on
Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 08:57:14 PM AEST
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This is so sad but beautifully written. I love it.
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Re: Men Cry Too
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 08:59:25 PM AEST
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Awwww Matt....I wish my arms could reach you now..I'd give you a great big hugg... and offer my shoulder to cry on.... This poem brought tears to my eyes... I hope those 42 days pass quickly so that you could be in the arms of your sweetheart soon....
Luv and Hugs to you both...
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Re: Men Cry Too
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by Alisialynn on
Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 09:01:05 PM AEST
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| It's beautiful. I hope it doesn't last and that you are back home soon. |
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Re: Men Cry Too
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 09:29:04 PM AEST
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bittersweet, beautifully written
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Re: Men Cry Too
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by LovingWhispers on
Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 10:38:51 PM AEST
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| The imagery here is real...the words are from the heart and I see you looking blankly out the plane window...***tears*** very sad .but het!! You have a love in your life that is sooo special that it hurts....Not in a bad way.in a way in which ...it will always take you back home Much love and and many hugs.....May you return safely to the arms of your heart,your home. |
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Re: Men Cry Too
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by Crow on
Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 11:58:17 PM AEST
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You and men like yourself show us all that land of the free, home of the brave aren`t just words. thay are backed-up with enormous courage and conviction for freedom.
Our loved ones and civilians would not be safe here without that tear you are willing to shed.
I thank you for that, be safe. Crow
[a beautiful poem] |
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Re: Men Cry Too
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by PhantomsBBYgrl on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 01:16:35 AM AEST
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| Matt this is a really great poem and i miss you alot!! Kim |
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Re: Men Cry Too
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by venkat on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 06:50:35 AM AEST
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Brave soldier.. wipe out your tears..our love and good wishes are always there for you
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Re: Men Cry Too
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by shelby on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 01:41:36 PM AEST
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Ok now you made me cry!! This is so heartfelt and touching. Im so sorry that you had to say yet another goodbye. 42 days have to seem like a life time. I want to thankyou for the sacrifices that you make for all of us. Im sending you a hug and a tissue .
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Re: Men Cry Too
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by The_Phantom on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 12:31:49 AM AEST
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Thank you Shadowscloud, much love.
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Re: Men Cry Too
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by The_Phantom on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 12:33:28 AM AEST
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To one of the greatest women I've every known, your comments like gold, they heal a broken soul. Thank you.
The Phantom |
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Re: Men Cry Too
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by The_Phantom on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 12:34:55 AM AEST
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Thank you for such a kind comment.
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Re: Men Cry Too
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by The_Phantom on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 12:35:58 AM AEST
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Thank you Ilhar, for being a friend.
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Re: Men Cry Too
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by The_Phantom on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 12:37:48 AM AEST
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LovingWhispers, your words are too kind, each comment you give is a breathe of sunshine, thank you.
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Re: Men Cry Too
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by The_Phantom on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 12:39:46 AM AEST
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"Land of the free, home of the brave" I never thought I'd be mentioned next those immortal words, I'm left speechless. Thank you.
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Re: Men Cry Too
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by The_Phantom on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 12:41:13 AM AEST
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Thank you honey, I miss you too.
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Re: Men Cry Too
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by The_Phantom on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 12:42:18 AM AEST
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Thank you sir for your kind words, your a true friend.
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Re: Men Cry Too
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by The_Phantom on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 12:44:11 AM AEST
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Shelby, Shelby, Shelby, don't cry I've done enough for the both of us, but thank you for the tissue.
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Re: Men Cry Too
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 08:38:40 PM AEST
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Matt this was so touching it really got to me!
I couldnt even imagine! I hope those days are short for you!There will be a time you will look back at this time & grow from it! God bless,
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