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Unsettled
Contributed by
suzy
on
Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I am everything and nothing all rolled into one
A raging unsettled sea of emotions about to come undone
A sad lonely girl whose lost herself somewhere
Desperately searching with every step fighting for air
No where to turn and no one to turn to
Always wondering if these grey skies will one day be blue
I am just another unknown face in the crowd
A tormented soul desperate to rid itself of this shroud
I am everything and nothing all rolled in to one
I am a raging sea of unsettled emotions that's coming undone
Copyright ©
suzy
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2003-07-04 16:05:00]
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Re: Unsettled
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 05:08:38 PM AEST
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I have been there, this is well written, keep writing it helps sort things out
Shari |
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Re: Unsettled
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by Alisialynn on
Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 06:19:04 PM AEST
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| I know how you feel. Well said. |
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Re: Unsettled
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by Crow on
Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 07:08:37 PM AEST
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this is written very well, nice work.
just a note to say hi, good wishes Crow |
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Re: Unsettled
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 12:11:37 AM AEST
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| Very well written ... great depth of feeling ... Jan |
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Re: Unsettled
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by POOBEAR on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 08:15:40 PM AEST
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I think you just described my whole life
with these words . I thought I was the
only one that felt like this. Thank you
for making me feel that I am not alone
in such a beautifully put way.
thanks
POOBEAR |
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Re: Unsettled
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by lonestranger on
Thursday, 30th September 2010 @ 08:47:49 PM AEST
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| i love this. t think u described me an my morning personality lol |
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