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Balancing rocks
Contributed by
vincy
on
Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 01:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Balance enhances awareness
Increased consciousness enforces balance
through the path of least resistance
a mode of release is achieved.
When rocks are delicately relaxed
on top of each other
through their finest, subtlest contact
amazing equilibrium is attained
& perfect balance is accomplished
here the possible transition to
harmonious coexistence can prevail.
There, a rock laying passively on a beach
having been ground down to its present size
by the waves, the winds, the forces of nature
rubbing against other rocks, time after time
constantly throughout the millenniums.
Now you can rescue it from oblivion
As we balance it upright, in equilibrium
we can notice serendipity shine through it.
The battered rock which we just balanced
is exalted, liberated, transformed
into a ballerina so delicately light on her toes
so harmoniously, gracefully erect
elevated into the realm of the miraculous.
When hundreds of rocks are likewise balanced
a mystical energy is released
expanding silently & peacefully
surrounding the environment with bliss
enhancing everyone in sight
such magnificent phenomenon
stuff that dreams are made of.
Copyright ©
vincy
... [
2003-07-04 13:35:00]
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Re: Balancing rocks
(User Rating: 1 )
by norm on
Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 02:46:38 PM AEST
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No one would dare challange the veracity
of the concept,...rock on rock...but of course
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Now that you have proved the act
I assume you established it as fact,
Come on over where I do live
and my checkbook, a balancing act, give |
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Re: Balancing rocks
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 03:04:41 PM AEST
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Just reading your poem has given me a sense of serenity, great work liked the flow
Shari |
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Re: Balancing rocks
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by tinka_belle on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 10:03:41 PM AEST
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this poem is so calming vincy
you can actually picture yourself there
balancing rocks
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Re: Balancing rocks
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 10:58:51 PM AEST
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| that was a really good poem. but my eyesight and brain functioning is now shot for the night because of those question marks!ahhh!but keep up the good work. |
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