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Super Hero::Part 3
Contributed by
InteruptedFate
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Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 11:35:00 AM in AEST
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Looking up, I see your hand.
Reaching out to make a stand.
You see a tear crawl down my cheek.
Fallen but not broken
You came right in by midnight storms.
To save my heart, so cold yet warm.
You see the blood drip from my arm.
Painless but still hurt.
There is no burden you can't take.
Your faults, as good as strengths.
You heal me with indulgence.
Quiet but still spoken.
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2003-07-04 11:35:00]
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Re: Super Hero::Part 3
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 12:21:11 PM AEST
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very moving, you seem to have a great support system
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Re: Super Hero::Part 3
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by Saira on
Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 10:11:44 PM AEST
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Full of depths and emotions. It's a great write. Well done!
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