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While You Were Out...

Contributed by LovingWhispers on Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 06:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry



This time for you is special and I will not interfere
Though I'd love to join you,I think I'll just wait here
Don't think that I'll be put out,or made to feel alone
I'll be happy just to sit and write,until you get back home
Lately,you've been miserable and feeling somewhat down
I think time spent with your kids,will bring your smiles 'round
You're such a wonderful daddy,they couldn't wish for a better one
So go on out, get crazy and have yourselves some fun
While you're gone I'll clean up,feed the cat and fold some clothes
I'll tidy up your puter desk and put your mess where it should go
So you see I have so much to do,really,I'll be fine
I'll even write about my night,over a glass of wine
Then when you get back home,you can read all about
Everything I got up to,while you and the kids were out
There's only one little thing,I want from you before you go
And thats a great big kiss,'cause I love you,don't you know
Now move your butt,get out the door,you're going to be late
Tell the kids I said hi,and please sweetheart,drive safe
xxxxxxx
Waving from the front porch,I watched the headlights disappear
I stood smiling and I sighed,for your scent still lingered near
But I knew I wouldn't be alone,not too much would you I miss
For you were still here with me,a part of you was in our kiss
I came inside,closed the door,looked about for a lil while
I noticed the roses in the vase,and again I had to smile
Moving through the rooms,each filled with loving memories
Of every single moment,we had spent together happily
I hung up all your clothes,made your lunch for work next day
Then I fed our cat,washed the dishes and put them away
I walked into the loungeroom,headed for your puter desk
Everything was everywhere,but still it was your mess
So I left it as I found it,what else could I do
For although it was a write off,it was still a part of you
Instead I just stood behind,ran my hands atop the chair
Closed my eyes,thought of you and pictured you right there
Writing away as you often do,working on your poems
Everything about you,has helped to make this house a home
It was then I thought to run a bath,relax my body for the night
So I immersed myself in bubbles and then began to write
I slowly sipped Italian red,felt my body begin to unwind
And as the bubbles tickled me,thoughts of you returned to mind
I wondered how your evening was,were you having fun and laughs
Oh how I wished you were here right now,sharing in my bath
There is music in the background,with sweet jasmine incense burning
And as I lie within the candlelight,sensual thoughts start turning
Rhythmic to my senses,arousals kiss comes into play
It reminds that your tender touch,is but a fantasy away
So sinking further to her depths,pulsating in her warmth
I enjoy the soothing solitude of the calm before the storm....
Water laps against my skin,ripples betray the hidden highs
Of all my mind is painting,upon the canvas of my sighs
'Tis you I see in colour,as golden as the morning sun
To quench your thirsting passion,as you drink with fluted tongue
Embracing my completion,you hold me in the air
To move along my body and place a whisper in my hair
"Hush my baby girl,swallow all your creamy sighs
Lay down the brush you paint me with and open up your eyes"
Turning from my lovers portait,I walked back from whence I came
I put aside my palette and faded dim,desires flame
My Italian red awaited,and as I sipped its life away
I was glad I had decided,to wait for you to play
So I stepped out of the bath,dried my body,brushed my hair
And walked into my favourite room,another we love to share
Again I lit some candles,slipped into a lace neglige of white
Climbed in under the covers and watched the window for headlights...




Copyright © LovingWhispers ... [ 2003-07-04 06:35:00]
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Re: While You Were Out... (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 08:04:11 AM AEST
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Ahhh..such a blissful write, Whispers... I enjoyed the relaxing evening.....
Hugs
Jenni


Re: While You Were Out... (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 09:26:19 AM AEST
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Wonderful I could reread this over and over
Shari


Re: While You Were Out... (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 04:29:42 PM AEST
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beautiful! wow!!


Re: While You Were Out... (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 12:32:59 AM AEST
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Oh, this is a truly wonderful write ... just beautiful ... Jan




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