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opposites attract in hell
Contributed by
LadyDama
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Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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cold morning air
breeze like ice
on this hot summer day
oddity from space
cools my heart
and melts my brain
hot summer day
but, oh so cold
the wind is blowing
my little dreams away
tired and weary
blistered finger
blood drips
down the candle of life
06/10/2003
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LadyDama
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2003-07-04 05:05:00]
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Re: opposites attract in hell
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 09:31:43 AM AEST
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a strong write although so sad
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Re: opposites attract in hell
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by shelby on
Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 11:26:20 AM AEST
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very emotional write, I know the desert feeling also hot as hell lol.
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Re: opposites attract in hell
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by venkat on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 03:28:39 AM AEST
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| Blood drips down the candle of life.my dear friend.this puts an awesome image before my eyes.. venkat |
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