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I Remember
Contributed by
savannah
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Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 02:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I remember when it first began
This like for you that I carried for so long
It was a year ago, it was summer
The night was warm and filled with fireworks
And your contagious laugh
I remember when it stopped
The like I had for you that I had carried around
It was a few months ago, it was winter
The night was cold and filled fireworks
And you with another as the new year began
I remember when it started again
The like I had for you that I almost forgot
It was a month ago, almost summer
The night was warm and I was lonely
And you were there ready and waiting
I remember when you finally kissed me
Finally recognizing the like you had for me
It was two weeks ago, it was summer
The day was hot and you wore a polo shirt
And I fell headfirst into your lips
I'll remember when it ends for good
When the like l have for you flickers out
It'll be a few weeks from now, it'll be summer
The night will be cool, and I won't be lonely
And I'll always love the friend you'll still be
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savannah
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2003-07-04 02:05:00]
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Re: I Remember
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 09:15:16 AM AEST
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Good write which I can relate to. Great work,
luvz stace |
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Re: I Remember
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 10:27:08 AM AEST
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good write
Shari |
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Re: I Remember
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by savannah on
Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 10:39:06 PM AEST
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| good joma- FINALLY |
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