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You Paint me Blue
Contributed by
eyesrustedshut
on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 11:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The portaits lying here, they don't even do you justice
You're more beautiful than any canvas could prove
These pale colors will never show your skin so smooth
I touch up your smile with this red and white mix
Once I fought a kiss from these covetous lips
With every swift stroke I grow more and more listless
When I stop to think with tear-filled eyes
I knew I'd make this painting run
So it ran but not as fast as you
and not out of the light of my sun
I don't even care why you led me on but I must admit
If there's one thing I would like
to ask whatever made you quit
Though this painting I'll not complete
you will receive your justice
Copyright ©
eyesrustedshut
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2003-07-03 23:05:00]
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Re: You Paint me Blue
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 12:44:02 AM AEST
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| Wow ... what a wonderful poem this is ... exceptional write ... Jan |
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Re: You Paint me Blue
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by tease_whizz on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 09:07:57 AM AEST
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| a very visual poem - you create some poignant images. you have a real way with words, hope to read more from you soon, Kate x |
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