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Superficial
Contributed by
InteruptedFate
on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 04:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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She hides her past,
Behind a mask.
She crys down deep inside,
Her confusion and her anger,
Make her want to hide.
She looks into her mirror,
And sees someone she's not.
She holds her head,
And wipes her tears,
She leaves her home, distraught.
She goes into the bathroom,
And throws up in a stall.
She goes up to the mirror,
To check her pretty face.
But instead she sees a superficial girl, bony, thin, and tall.
Hoping life will sometime end,
As she reaches for her purse.
Another individual makes eye to eye contact.
She looks away with sudden pain,
And feels her life's a curse.
Diseases, diseases, diseases,
Cover her body and her mind.
What will become of this sad tale of confusion?
A girl so young at heart,
With happiness hard to find.
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InteruptedFate
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2003-07-03 16:35:00]
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Re: Superficial
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by afraid_of_fear on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 04:49:08 PM AEST
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this is good.. and all too true, too often..
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Re: Superficial
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by faffeee on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 09:06:58 PM AEST
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| well written and very true...i turn round everyday and see how many of my girlfriends are getting more and more f****d up all the time, because their own problems with themselves, in their heads..its all too common these days and so horribly sad...xxx |
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