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No Reason To Stay
Contributed by
afraid_of_fear
on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 10:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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All my last hopes are finally fading away
I have no real reason to stay
Piercing sadness stabs through my heart
Tearing my very existence apart
I can’t take this pain any more
This eternal headache, inside I’m so sore
It’s wearing me down, so hard to breathe
I hate everyone, everything, let me leave
Choking on every gulp of air
Each stumbling step is too much to bear
Kill my presence, kill my care
Take me away from this world of despair
No more will I pretend, no more can I hide
Just let me commit suicide
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2003-07-03 10:05:00]
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Re: No Reason To Stay
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by ruby_star_angel on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 11:07:35 AM AEST
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| Oh, Charlotte...I know how you're feeling. I've been there so much, but don't commit suicide..you're one of the major reasons why I haven't. Don't leave me, okay? If you do die, I won't know what to do...don't commit suicide... |
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Re: No Reason To Stay
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 05:08:51 PM AEST
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!
No I won't let you commit suicide! Not that I can stop you,it is your decision,but please know that there are alot of people who will listen to your reasons for wanting to,including myself! Write me a poem on the pain you
are enduring right at this moment! I mean is it boys? Parents? Life in general? Please
stay alive...your poetry is beautiful! You have so much to say!And I want to hear it!
Angel always.....Godspeed my friend! joni |
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Re: No Reason To Stay
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 09:45:20 PM AEST
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What makes you think your pain will end if you do die? Could it be that then you have an eternity to feel the depair? Do you really want to take that chance? There is so much talent here please continue to write about your pain. We will be here to listen.
Shari |
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Re: No Reason To Stay
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by Hiddendarkness1705 on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 09:59:38 PM AEST
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| This was beautiful and summed up all of the emotions I have been experiencing. Your such a good poet |
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Re: No Reason To Stay
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 11:18:32 PM AEST
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Awww...charlotte....
Please don't leave....You are my dear friend.
Your poem is well written but I hope it remains a poem and not anything more.
Hanna |
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