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Beast
Contributed by
calbob
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Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 09:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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The student changed deep inside
All the good within him died
His skin was torn, his bones they grew
His eyes took on a redish hue
Humanity gone, strength remains
Love he lost, rage he gains
Like frightned cows the normals scatter
He sees them run which doesnt matter
He's on the first with a leap
The normal lies in a bleeding heap
A second kick, the first is dead
He turns and palms anothers head
Forearm swells muscles bunch
The normal dies with a chrunch
Carnage follows terrors rule
The kid turned beast destroys his school
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calbob
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2003-07-03 09:35:00]
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Re: Beast
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by LadyDama on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 10:00:49 AM AEST
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| compelling... another take on the school rage scenario, without guns or bombs... very imaginative... blessings... |
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Re: Beast
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 09:47:12 PM AEST
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Writing is a great outlet, this was well done
Shari |
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