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Get Out
Contributed by
punkwthn
on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 08:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I hate you. I wish you dead.
You're invading my thoughts, get out of my head.
You stab my heart with an innocent knife.
What did I do, to deserve this strife?
I resent you. I wish you remorse.
You're scaring me, quit using force.
You reach your greedy hand into my brain.
Life was once so simple, now it's insane.
I detest you. I wish you reality.
You don't understand, stop abusing morality.
You take from me, something never returned.
Now you act to care, now you're concerned.
I despise you. I wish you pain.
You're everywhere, grant my fain.
You make suicide seem tangible.
Why you did this to me, is not understandable.
I hate you. I wish you dead.
You're invading my thoughts, get out of my head.
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punkwthn
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2003-07-03 08:05:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Get Out
(User Rating: 1 ) by ForsakenSoul on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 05:21:44 PM AEST (User
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Good even given that I generally dislike AA BB rhymes. You balance the rhythm with short, simple sentences. Perhaps simple is sometimes best. Again good job. |
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