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tuesday
Contributed by
me
on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2003 @ 12:35:00 PM in AEST
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By chance,
we met on a train.
A massive lady
was resting
most of her weight
on my smallest toe.
The scruffily bearded man
from the corner
shot a yellow-toothed grin
my way,
and the blast of dirty cigarettes,
and regurgitated alcohol
assailed my nostrils.
I discreetly turned away,
and glanced
at the assaulted toe instead.
You
were smirking impishly;
those thoughtful, dark eyes
fixated
on the passing scenes
of life,
the secret world
of every day;
mesmerized,
not by my beauty,
not by the perfection
of our surroundings,
only by the unfolding
of another Tuesday morning.
Copyright ©
me
... [
2003-07-02 12:35:00]
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Re: tuesday
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2003 @ 07:29:03 PM AEST
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Anonymos*
I think you have beautifully captured a moment in time... i feel your emotions and feel as though i am right there.
i aslo enjoy the fact that it's so simplistic and practical... day to day. i think that u've captured something which most people experience on a daily bases.. down to a slow motion time shot.
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Re: tuesday
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by norm on
Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 01:51:36 PM AEST
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What a great theme...This is the kind of theme that could be the basis for 10 more poems........If you sell the theme, I'll buy it...
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