Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 22-November 06:11:47 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

The Poets Commenting Problem

Contributed by norm on Wednesday, 2nd July 2003 @ 02:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



Listen my lads and listen my lassies
None of us want to be known for our nasties,
we're given a job without a description,
How can we comment without a depiction?

Here's what I mean, I'll tell in a sample
You'll see what I mean and here's an example,
I think you're a stinker, your poems they stink, too
Now, how can I comment on a fella like you?

We have some real sweeties, a few just for hell,
There's Shari, Nessa, Joni(n), Michelle.
These girls are so nice, they'll never complain,
They'd rather just skip it than hand out distain.

If I had a poem that showed t'was ten reads
But had only one comment from all of those deeds,
Sure as I'm sittin', I'll tell you no bunk,
I'd sure think that nine of you folks thought it stunk.

Does anyone see how our work be critiqued
With honest appraisal and nobody piqued,
If you do, lads and lassies, you're smarter than me,
I'll watch all the comments and maybe I'll see.




Copyright © norm ... [ 2003-07-02 02:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: The Poets Commenting Problem (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Wednesday, 2nd July 2003 @ 04:30:36 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
LOL ... well written ... and that's honest critique :)) Jan


Re: The Poets Commenting Problem (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Wednesday, 2nd July 2003 @ 06:17:09 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Im sorry but I dont know this to be feedback or not lol..but your mind amazes me. :)The things you think of lol..Fantastic and I truly,really, honest injun...mean this .
Well Said!!!


Re: The Poets Commenting Problem (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 2nd July 2003 @ 09:17:18 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Like it or not, is not for me to decide for it is within you to be happy with what apears in word. Well written, yes that is true, I actually like it and so should you.


Re: The Poets Commenting Problem (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Wednesday, 2nd July 2003 @ 11:17:23 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
My friend I am not always nice
It is just that you add the spice
to my day with your prose
I can't find anything wrong I suppose
Shari


Re: The Poets Commenting Problem (User Rating: 1 )
by vincy on Wednesday, 2nd July 2003 @ 12:55:37 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Right on, terrific and to the point.
What's worthwhile is honest feedback
rather than superficial, clumsy critique
and a sense of humour to wash it down.
Since we are at it have a look at a guests critique
of my recently posted poem " Child's play "
I must've pushed some buttons there which shaws
such reaction can be considered a hit. ( smile )


Re: The Poets Commenting Problem (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 2nd July 2003 @ 01:40:12 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Dearest Norm,so true to form,
Your words they dance on my screen.
My name I do see,
A sweetie I be?
My comments will never be mean.

You make my day,in a peculiar way,
Those meanies lack for fun!
You make me laugh,never to cry,
So I just say "screw everyone"!!!
~~~changes line~~~
So I just say " I LOVE YOU,HON"!!!! lol
angel almost always...godspeed...joni


Re: The Poets Commenting Problem (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 04:42:03 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Well written.. venkat


Re: The Poets Commenting Problem (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 11:49:07 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Norm once again another surprise from you.This is well said. Thanks for mentioning me as being a sweety!!! I love your poetry Norm!
Michelle


Re: The Poets Commenting Problem (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 02:39:13 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
hello norm here's your favourite sweetie
trying to think of something meaty
you know I've been guilty of nasty remarks
I even apologised for some of my "barks"
But if I can't say what I really think
I don't make a comment (how low can one sink)
I like to believe I say something bolder
but "beauty is in the eye of the beholder




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com