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The Child Within
Contributed by
Patricia_Petro
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Friday, 12th July 2002 @ 12:47:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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The child within
sips chamomile on rowboats at tea time
in petticoats pulled up to her knees
while plucking petals in virgin bliss
cheeks kissed by the sun and daisy-faced
as lily pads soar past lavender clouds
of innocent cotton candy
so sweet
and filled with hope
she smiles.
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Patricia_Petro
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2002-07-12 12:47:46]
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Re: The Child Within
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by Chrissie on
Friday, 12th July 2002 @ 05:14:26 PM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful Patricia..
Chrissie x |
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Re: The Child Within
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by Carrie on
Tuesday, 16th July 2002 @ 11:08:24 AM AEST
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| Pat... I can see the lavendar clouds and the cotton candy. This piece, short and ever so sweet, captures perfectly the delicate flavor of innocence. I wish to God I could write so perfectly, so concisely. |
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