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In the Motion
Contributed by
tbsbikescene
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Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 10:35:00 AM in AEST
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Cherish the happy moments...
Wait till someone screams
And only makes it worse
***** what you heard
This isn't even close
I can't see in front of me...
Your beauty is blinding...
2 yellow lines that occasionaly dash
Let me pass....Let it pass
Screeching past these moving objects
As we find out how dangerous this mechanical masterpiece really is
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2003-07-01 10:35:00]
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Re: In the Motion
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2003 @ 12:51:26 AM AEST
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oh wow, great message here, your right, we all would be better by far to cherish the happy moments, life is so precarious, very vivid images, i like how and where you put in this line,"Your beauty is blinding..." seems to pull it all together along with your yellow lines... hugs n' love to you n' yours, nessa
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Re: In the Motion
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by Tbsbikescene on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 11:46:19 AM AEST
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Thank you soo much....its people like you that actually make me believe my writings mean something to someone and inspire me to write more....thank you for your kind words...
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