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Beginning Of The End
Contributed by
Debz
on
Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 09:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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So many times for so long
I had tried to tell you
that I would never be held
unless I came to you
I waited for a month
to see if I was right
without even touching you
throughout the entire night
there came the answer
without a single word
You didn't even notice it
not in the least bit perturbed
You just said goodnight
and rolled onto your side
with your back facing me
to keep me from your sight
Why would you not come to me
to be held just now and then
or did you simply lose interest
just like all the other men
For us, this was, without a doubt
The beginning of the end
Copyright ©
Debz
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2003-07-01 09:35:00]
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Re: Beginning Of The End
(User Rating: 1 )
by norm on
Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 10:10:31 AM AEST
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Your poem is written very well
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you must be very busy
for you to know and tell
what all the other men do
is quite a job, dear belle.
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when it comes to 'all men'
I must be quite unique
When I get in bed at night
Occasionally, I peek
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Re: Beginning Of The End
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by Evanescencefreak on
Sunday, 6th February 2011 @ 04:42:03 AM AEST
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| I like this poem even thought I cant really relate. I've never had much experience with men but I know it can be hard to watch somethig slowly fall apart and not be able to do anything. It has a good tone, even if it isnt a happy one. |
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