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User (Lee-Smith)
Contributed by
Beadle
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Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
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First when we met,
You seemed so nice,
But now you seem so fake,
You ***** me up inside,
And all you do is take,
It's seems that it is possible,
That I have misjudged you,
Then I don't know,
I just don't know what is true,
You call me up,
You call me up,
You always let me down,
You call me up,
You call me up,
You always let me down,
You're a user,
You're a loser,
You're a user,
An abuser,
I don't know if you're fake,
Or if you're for real,
I don't know how t'take,
Or just how I should feel,
I ***** hate you sometimes,
Why don't you see,
You've commited the worst crimes,
The damage you do to me,
You call me up,
You call me up,
You always let me down,
You call me up,
You call me up,
You always let me down,
You're a user,
You're a loser,
You're a user,
An abuser,
Stop ***** me about,
I really don't need that,
Stop ***** me about,
I really don't need that,
Oh let me out,
Or let me in,
Let me in,
Or let me out,
Oh let me out,
Or let me in,
Let me in,
Or let me out,
You're a user,
You're a loser,
You're a user,
An abuser,
The best thing I can do now,
Is to forget you,
Just blank you out,
As fast as I can do,
I won't say "Hello"
Just "Goodbye fool"!
Copyright ©
Beadle
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2003-06-29 05:05:00]
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Re: User (Lee-Smith)
(User Rating: 1 )
by Bizzy on
Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 06:45:17 PM AEST
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Hello, Beadle! Your lyrics are an excellent description of an abusive relationship. I loved it, except,.... perhaps what the stars stood for.
I'm a Christian and a grandma, not in favor of some kinds of language. The fact remains that you REALLY expressed this idea well.
So you are Beadle, perhaps you'd be interested in my poem about Beatle, 'John Lennon.' Bizzy |
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Re: User (Lee-Smith)
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 07:43:33 PM AEST
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| Ahhh... relationships can be confusing at times for everyone. Nice poem but why do people say a user rather than an user. Sorry things like this bug me. If you've got an answer put it on IRL. |
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Re: User (Lee-Smith)
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by tease_whizz on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 05:27:51 PM AEST
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| i really like this - it has a strong rhythm and a lot of raw emotion in it, which makes it honest and great to read. keep writing, Kate (KT!) x |
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