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Torn
Contributed by
garyh
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Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 04:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I am torn between two people
Both from different worlds
Things were going just fine
Until just a moment ago
They fought and lied
All because of me
One thinks I am too good for her
But I think just the opposite
She needs someone close and dear
Someone who is near
The other loves me and I don't know why
She was just a friend and nothing more
Until one day I crossed her mind
I don't know what to be
I am confused and in pain
My mind is jungled with thoughts of hurt
Thoughts of vain
And thoughts of love
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garyh
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2003-06-29 04:35:00]
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Re: Torn
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by Sapphire on
Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 07:03:53 AM AEST
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| Reading this I can feel how torn you are. Expressed very well. A nice poem. |
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Re: Torn
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by angelrae on
Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 07:01:49 AM AEST
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| A very wonderfully expressed poem. What you write, I feel. What road shall we take? Either road will take us to learning and growth. |
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