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the payment for the game
Contributed by
hermoiii
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Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 12:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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is this the payment for the game?
hatred and self-pity---i feel these way
is this the payment for the no rules game?
shame and lost i have to pay
is this the payment for such playful game?
losing one's self and pretending everythings okay
is this the payment for the game?
shattered heart and damaged soul in vain
is this the payment for such illicit game?
feeling dirty, filthy, and unworthy--- all my days
is this the payment for the illegal game?
hurt, depression and oblivious everyday
is this the payment for playing your dirty game?
feeling ***** angry seeing your ***** face! you are just lame!
if these are the things that i have to pay!
well the next time i see you, I wish you go burn in hell!
you *****! you good for nothing ***** *****!
i might as well see you in hell burning with infinite pain! GO TO HELL USER!!!
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2003-06-29 00:35:00]
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Re: the payment for the game
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by Sapphire on
Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 06:49:16 AM AEST
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| Ouch! Intense anger here, but very well vented. Nice write. |
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Re: the payment for the game
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by kangarose on
Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 10:44:08 AM AEST
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| i know how it feels to be used and played on by someone tat tells you they love you then just leaves you to dangle in the breeze while they are off playing other games with someone else... love the way you express the anger here... very well done and hope writing it out helped if not a lot even a little |
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Re: the payment for the game
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by Saira on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2003 @ 06:27:31 PM AEST
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| Well expressed anger. Good write! |
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