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Dew Lust
Contributed by
donslovechild
on
Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 10:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Park battles are like dancing rainbows
along the still river
softly gone from above
breeze and wheels
carry
take their word
they twinkle
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donslovechild
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2003-06-28 22:35:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Dew Lust
(User Rating: 1 ) by tease_whizz on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2003 @ 12:54:27 PM AEST (User
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i like this - not too sure that i fully understand it, but the simplicity and suggestion of childhood pleasures makes it a great short read. keep them coming, many pears to you, KT x |
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