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Very tired
Contributed by
apollo
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Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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How is it, with sleep of twelve hours,
to become very faint?
An anguish like that of scorched popcorn,
now it is all ruined.
Beautiful ecstacy of the Earth,
an I am speechless for the first.
I believe in the tests that were sent forth my way,
however I failed those tests.
Trying to find an affectionate moment to tell my feelings,
open up if you will.
I failed those tests, and you failed me.
Copyright ©
apollo
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2003-06-28 20:05:00]
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Re: Very tired
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by Percursors on
Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 08:30:43 PM AEST
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| I loved your comparisons...this was a great write...thanx for letting us read it... |
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Re: Very tired
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 01:20:52 AM AEST
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Excellent use of language here i don't know how you deep thinkers do it! well done.
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