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The Death of Ann
Contributed by
norm
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Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
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LostLove
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Let me tell you, you have had it,
I'm just about to throw you out,
If you looked into a mirror
There'd not be a single doubt.
Your hair is messy. Your dress is too,
Your skin has got a brownish hue,
Your shoes are spotted with dirty goo
This is sure the end of you.
You seem misshapen, your looks no more,
There was a time I did adore
Your sweet and playful simple ways
But that's no more..no more these days.
I will replace you, if I can,
I'll put you where you're not with man,
You're in the can..you're on the ban
You chewed up, dirty doll, 'Raggedy Ann'.
Copyright ©
norm
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2003-06-28 16:05:00]
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Re: The Death of Ann
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 04:33:02 PM AEST
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If I could I would remove the goo
But I don't know that how to do
I would clean up her dress
So she wouldn't look a mess
I would fix her just for you
Unfortunately that I can't do
Shari |
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Re: The Death of Ann
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by Sapphire on
Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 07:22:09 PM AEST
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| Ouch! What a rebuff. Perhaps deservedly so? Well written. I think we all have felt that way. |
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Re: The Death of Ann
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by venkat on
Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 10:44:49 AM AEST
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Well written.. she is in the can. and she is on the ban....and no more..
thanks for sharing this one.. venkat |
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Re: The Death of Ann
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by vincy on
Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 12:16:26 PM AEST
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looks like she was not much fun, Raggedy Ann
so far as I'm concearned even Barbie doll won't do
what's with puppets nowdays they don't qualify
looks like you had a run with the daughter of a gun.
(who chewed her up was it the doggie or...Noooooo!) |
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