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Strong Enough?
Contributed by
jaima
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Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 03:35:00 PM in AEST
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Will I forget all the love and tenderness,
That was ever known to me?
In my darkest hour will it help to set me free?
Will I even want to hold on,
To you and this loveing bond?
When I'm crying to be set free,
Of all this pain inside of me?
Will it hold me back,
Will it stop me from leaving,
Will it change my heart from black?
Is your love strong enough,
For me to want to stay,
To want to make it though,
Just another day?
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2003-06-28 15:35:00]
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Re: Strong Enough?
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by Calbob on
Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 04:31:23 PM AEST
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Its a decent poem. I imagine it sums up what you felt pretty good. You might want to try and not ryhme 'free' and 'me' so much, it becomes repetative.
-calbob |
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Re: Strong Enough?
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by Percursors on
Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 08:46:08 PM AEST
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| I disagree w/ Calbob I loved it...I relate to it...GREAT WRITE... |
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Re: Strong Enough?
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by Jaima on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 01:12:50 AM AEST
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| ahh thanks for the comment i'll keep that in mind |
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Re: Strong Enough?
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by Jaima on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 01:15:22 AM AEST
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| ahh thanks |
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Re: Strong Enough?
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by Wrybod on
Sunday, 24th August 2003 @ 09:52:26 AM AEST
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There is a period in life when one is naturally highly charged with 'sexual emotions'..... these are costantly examined by ones mind/brain which has not the experience or maturity to
manage the task.
Hence turmoil
BUT....you can't have one without the other
It's all part of life's rich tapestry |
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Re: Strong Enough?
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by Jaima on
Monday, 25th August 2003 @ 07:12:57 AM AEST
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| what makes you think this is sexual?..and what do you mean you cant have one with out the other..i think you have really read my poem wrong! |
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