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Ocaen Melodies
Contributed by
ShadowsCloud
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Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 03:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Ocean melodies, a loving moment
Spray surf, seashores crescenting
Walking in the gray mist dawning
Hand in hand, searching
Collecting shells and sand dollars
For fun and future memories
Listening to the vibrant drumming
Surf pounding the sand
Delighting in the warm water
Washing our feet, caressing
Kissing to the sound of the sea
Ocean melodies, a loving moment
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ShadowsCloud
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2003-06-28 03:35:00]
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Re: Ocaen Melodies
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 09:40:08 AM AEST
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a very beautiful moment
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Re: Ocaen Melodies
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by The_Phantom on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 12:52:42 AM AEST
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A very sooting poem, the words calm emotions, but ignite the desire. Awsome.
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Re: Ocaen Melodies
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Thursday, 31st July 2003 @ 01:00:04 PM AEST
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Ah yes Candice,
We've talked of these moments before and yet once again you capture, in words, the floods of feelings that form everlasting memories.
This one helps the memories of the sand sticking to the glistening wet toes.
With love
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Re: Ocaen Melodies
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by ShadowsCloud on
Thursday, 31st July 2003 @ 11:43:11 PM AEST
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Dean, thanks for your comment. I am glad that you like it.
ShadowsCloud |
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