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God
Contributed by
cutey
on
Thursday, 26th June 2003 @ 08:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Why oh why did you have
to take such a sweet kind man
from this world while he was so
young and had a lot to do and get
in life he had a lot a head of him why
he had to be the one that had to leave
his dream's behind and some one that he
loves and his best friend he was such a sweet
loving kind wonderful person he was the type that
would give you the shirt off his back he seem like
he had his dream's all ready plan and a head of him
why did you take such a great guy to night and not
someone else in stead of the one you took when it
was not his time.
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cutey
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2003-06-26 20:45:00]
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Re: God
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 12:56:06 AM AEST
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| What a very touching write.Sometimes its so unexplainable!Christina |
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Re: God
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by vincy on
Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 06:06:27 AM AEST
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what if I take those I love most before I do the rest
what if it is a far far better place they are at now?. |
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Re: God
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by vincy on
Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 06:13:24 AM AEST
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what if I take those I love most before I do the rest
what if it is a far far better place they are at now?. |
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