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She Is Now Sixteen
Contributed by
PhantomsLDY
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Thursday, 26th June 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
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It seems like only yesterday
She was easy to hold, so small and yet unafraid
I watched her sleep, such a peaceful angel
Her life's path yet untold
She turned sixteen on the 17th of June
She once was a sweet budding rose
Now she has turned into a beautiful bloom
Her hurt and pain used to be so easy to fix
With a loving word and a little kiss
Now it's much harder, It's now her heart involved
I miss my baby girl
But, I love the young woman now facing the world
I hope she finds HER Phantom on the very first try
I never want to see her in pain, her heart torn and tried
I don't want her to cry the same tears that I've cried
I know I can't shield her from all that will hurt
It all comes too soon I was willing to wait
She turned sixteen on the 17th of June
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Re: She Is Now Sixteen
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 26th June 2003 @ 06:13:49 PM AEST
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a beautiful write
Shari |
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Re: She Is Now Sixteen
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 12:52:00 AM AEST
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Aww this is so amazing, she is really lucky to have a mother like you. And from another 16 year old...when things do get tough, it is really good to know that you have your mother there to back you up and believe me, things will get tough, but with a mothers love, it is easier to get through the problems. Great write ^_^
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Re: She Is Now Sixteen
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by venkat on
Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 02:39:42 AM AEST
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| A lovely poem.. venkat |
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Re: She Is Now Sixteen
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 03:42:15 AM AEST
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| wow! this is so sweet! my mara will be 17 in august and your right time flys lol, seems like just yesterday they were babies doesnt it?? very lovely poem, happy birthday to your baby girl from me:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: She Is Now Sixteen
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by The_Phantom on
Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 08:45:09 AM AEST
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Masterful writing my love, It touched me, I'm so glad I was there to see it, simplely beauitiful.
The Phantom |
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Re: She Is Now Sixteen
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by Trisha on
Thursday, 11th September 2003 @ 03:52:11 PM AEST
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| This is beautiful poem of your daughter. She seems like she has alot in life to go. She has a good mom that has her head on right. Some people I know don't. |
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Re: She Is Now Sixteen
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 05:07:52 PM AEST
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| A mother's love for her child is such a beautiful thing. Great write!! |
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