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lOVE IS JUST SO
Contributed by
Arimora
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Thursday, 26th June 2003 @ 10:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I saw her passing by me
Missunderstanding reallity
Mistaking lonelliness
Currupting my identity
Can I kiss you goodbye
Could I make you fly
Could I change what I thought it was mines
Could I change
LOve is just so cruel
Its amazing but is true
Its killing me and I am not in the moon
Look at my hands what do you see
A heart desperate for our touch
A heart desperate for you seing
A million toughts for ever
cossuming my identity
You made me fly
I kiss the pain away goodbye
Its too bad that you are not mines
cause I understand everything
Including when you said goobye
LOVE IS JUST SO CRUEL
IT'S AMAZING BUT IS TRUE
ITS KILLING ME BUT I AM NOT IN THE MOON
LOOK AT MY HANDS WHAT WOULD YOU SEE...
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Arimora
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2003-06-26 10:05:00]
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Re: lOVE IS JUST SO
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by vincy on
Thursday, 26th June 2003 @ 12:45:58 PM AEST
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" empty handed and the Moon may mean
love unfulfilled?".
The poem depicts the feeling of falling in love
without getting satisfactory feedback,
some call this passing infactuation. |
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Re: lOVE IS JUST SO
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by Sexygirl on
Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 09:38:53 AM AEST
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| Yes love can be so crule as well as something we all wish for.....well written,, |
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