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A Falling Star
Contributed by
withlove_me
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Thursday, 8th August 2002 @ 12:36:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The Heavens abound with sparkling light
Each Star shining ever so bright
When a Star dies and gives up its fight
Do we hear a cry in the night?
Watch a Star fall from the sky
As its light burns out and slowly dies
Do we feel sad and our heart sigh
Or do we stare at the ones left up in the sky
Not to feel sad would be so wrong
That star has fell from where it belonged
Its gone forever,turned out its light
And left a black hole in the night.
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withlove_me
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2002-08-08 12:36:08]
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Re: A Falling Star
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th August 2002 @ 12:43:10 AM AEST
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| I really liked the poem. It sounded really beautiful, and is well-written. Good job. |
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Re: A Falling Star
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by Chrissie on
Sunday, 11th August 2002 @ 08:01:31 AM AEST
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A gem of a poem...I love it
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