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Without You
Contributed by
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
on
Thursday, 8th August 2002 @ 07:00:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I looked out my window, on a cold snowy day,
counting the moments since you went away.
I keep wondering how long, I’ll feel like this inside,
as I keep wiping the tears from my eyes.
I never knew what I was letting go,
till the loneliness without you, continued to grow.
The light in my eyes has all but since gone.
as I wonder how long I can continue to hold on.
It was a night like this, on a cold winter's day,
I watched you walk out, and I didn’t ask you to stay.
Our problems weren’t few, and our emotions were high,
as we decided it was time, for us to say goodbye.
I can still see you walking out that door,
As I remember my heart sinking to the floor.
What a fool we were, giving up so fast,
without giving our love a chance to last.
Now I struggle for self control to maintain,
as I look out the window, and the snow turns to rain.
Copyright ©
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
... [
2002-08-08 07:00:26]
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Re: Without You
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 8th August 2002 @ 07:10:02 AM AEST
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Wow!! This shows so much emotion!! I am enjoying your poems very much.. and relating to them.. Thank you for sharing this..
Jenni |
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Re: Without You
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by lil_hummingbird on
Thursday, 8th August 2002 @ 09:49:36 AM AEST
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| This was so very well wrote. I think we have all been through these emotions at one time or another. Well done. great write. |
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Re: Without You
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by angelsrborn on
Thursday, 8th August 2002 @ 05:12:08 PM AEST
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| this is a really good poem! can i put it into my poem book that im making? |
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Re: Without You
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Thursday, 8th August 2002 @ 11:17:41 PM AEST
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| yes, you can, I would be honered. |
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Re: Without You
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th August 2002 @ 12:45:05 AM AEST
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| Wow. That's a great poem. I love the way it was written. |
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