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Daddy, Please Love Me
Contributed by
wild_heart_of_fire
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Wednesday, 25th June 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
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Daddy, Please Love Me
You come home late
You’re drunk again
I know what happens next
Let the fun begin
I ignore your harsh words
And the racket that you make
I pretend not to care
While my hands begin to shake
You wish I were a little boy
Instead I am the girl from hell
I already hurt myself enough by piercing my own skin
So I don’t need you to pierce my heart as well
I’m sorry that I can’t be your little boy
I’m a little girl instead
Please don’t say those harsh things daddy
Don’t say that I’m better off dead
All I want is for you to love me
Is that too much to ask?
I’m sorry that I don’t make you happy
Especially after the beer you had last
Daddy don’t hit me
I didn’t mean to talk back
Daddy please love me
That’s all that I ask.
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Re: Daddy, Please Love Me
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by punkwthn on
Wednesday, 25th June 2003 @ 06:22:24 PM AEST
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| Awww....this poem is so sad! It was really excellent though. I hope things work out for you! Goodluck*~ |
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Re: Daddy, Please Love Me
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by BlackFire9786 on
Wednesday, 25th June 2003 @ 06:23:49 PM AEST
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Hey twin~sad write, but i love it. I'm glad ur a girl personally, lol, luv ya lotz
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Re: Daddy, Please Love Me
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 25th June 2003 @ 08:08:17 PM AEST
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so many of us bear the scars of our childhood, when we should just have joyful memories, keep writing it helps I know.
PM me if you need to talk
Shari
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Re: Daddy, Please Love Me
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by cryingonmyporch on
Thursday, 26th June 2003 @ 01:30:12 AM AEST
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I have a poem I wrote to my dad. He wished i was a boy too. Dads sometimes sux and so do moms at times.
Always
Amy |
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Re: Daddy, Please Love Me
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 26th June 2003 @ 02:01:15 AM AEST
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So sad there are people out there that have to go through this,I hope your wounds heal!
Hang in there! Christina |
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Re: Daddy, Please Love Me
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by wyrd_faerie on
Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 03:01:31 PM AEST
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| oh...this poem is so sad...but so beautiful...i wanted to say thankyou so much for everything you've said about my poems...it touches me more than you know...and this is beautiful...well done... |
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Re: Daddy, Please Love Me
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by wild_heart_of_fire on
Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 04:30:46 PM AEST
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thankyou. your comments mean alot. sometimes peoples comments are the only thing that keeps me writing at the end of the day. everything i have said about your poems is oh so true. if i had 1/4 of your talent i'd be in heaven on earth. you have an absolutely stunning and amazing gift that i only hope to develop in time. i love love love to read your poems. may you have beautiful and sunny days from now until forever ends!
Always and Forever,
~*riki lynn*~
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Re: Daddy, Please Love Me
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by squeesh on
Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 10:53:16 PM AEST
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hey
i know its hard my relationship with my dad isnt that great either just hang in there before you know it you'll be out of there and never have to put up with him again i know hes your dad and everything but sometimes kids are better off without their parents if you ever need someone to talk to im always here... its a really great poem and really touching it almost made me cry
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Re: Daddy, Please Love Me
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by Apartment213 on
Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 01:31:00 AM AEST
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wow this hits close to home, i mean in a certain way...this is an amazing poem. feel free to coment on my poetry anytime
KENNY |
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