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beyond I take control
Contributed by
pam
on
Thursday, 8th August 2002 @ 06:58:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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circle in the sky
I ask why
do I fall down before you
why can't I move beyond you
and why won't you give
me the courage to leave
I'm sick inside me
I'm sick to death of me
I'm sick of hating me
I'm sick of trying to be
what you've formed of me
that is not me
and you are not you
I can leave if I want to
and I've decided upon
taking control of being gone
this is goodbye circle in the sky
now it's your turn to ask why
Copyright ©
pam
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2002-08-08 06:58:58]
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Re: beyond I take control
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on
Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 01:15:33 PM AEST
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Very nice, a fine write, dark poetry is not usually my thing but yours is well written.
Great job. |
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Re: beyond I take control
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 03:18:25 PM AEST
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| A lot of other people including myself can relate to this poem. You did a fantastic job of this poem. keep it up! |
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