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Four Petals Apart
Contributed by
full_blur
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Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 11:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Three lives were given to me, in the summer of buzzing bees,
and hold them close I tried, though this was not how it was to be.
I wished four petals of one rose, in the summer of swaying trees,
but angels decreed for the three and me, a future quite different than what I believed.
Given to myself and the beautiful three, in the summer of cooling breeze,
were four petals and four roses, against which I did most ardently plea.
For of the love which was love times three, a signed check is all the three would see,
and in my dwelling ripe with regret, I remember a summer of three just for me.
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Re: Four Petals Apart
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 11:42:37 PM AEST
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quite interesting I enjoyed this write very much
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Re: Four Petals Apart
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 25th June 2003 @ 10:26:16 AM AEST
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It pulled me right in!!Love it.
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Re: Four Petals Apart
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 04:18:42 AM AEST
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| sad but beautiful words...this one has my mind racing... |
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