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Tiny Flower
Contributed by
Sapphire
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Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 06:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Tiny flower, small and precious,
I’m so sorry you did not bloom.
I didn’t get to feel you move,
Contented in my womb.
Tiny gift, small and ideal,
I’m so sorry your wrapping frayed.
You were all that was left of my special world;
I wish that you had stayed.
Tiny baby, small and perfect,
You didn’t stay long enough to see,
That I’d loved your sire with all my heart,
And you were his gift to me.
Tiny child, I miss you so,
But it wasn’t meant to be,
And the love I will always have for you,
Must now live in my memory.
Sapphire
Copyright ©
Sapphire
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2003-06-24 18:45:00]
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Re: Tiny Flower
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by norm on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 08:06:13 PM AEST
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your poem has touiched me...deeply
it will touch anyone who reads it |
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Re: Tiny Flower
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 08:21:13 PM AEST
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| Aahhh such a sad poem .. but you have written it in such a lovely way ... beautiful... Jan |
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Re: Tiny Flower
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 08:28:25 PM AEST
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it sounds like that baby bloomed in your heart, a beautiful poem although so very sad.]
Shari
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Re: Tiny Flower
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by youngpoet1989 on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 10:34:46 PM AEST
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awww :(
I'm sorry for your loss,
very sad poem :*( |
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Re: Tiny Flower
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 11:35:59 PM AEST
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| awww a beautiful poem for a dear sweetie...... im so sorry, big hugs and oodles of love to you:) nessa |
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Re: Tiny Flower
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by juliette on
Wednesday, 25th June 2003 @ 12:05:32 AM AEST
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It seems whenever I visit this site someone has written something I desperately needed to read. You are the poet who has touched me this evening. I suffered a tubal pregnancy in January which explains my lapse in writing and my absence from the site. I was physically sick and even sicker at heart. My fiance pretty much left me to process this on my own and I was not strong enough to do so. I was very early along and the thought of you carrying the child and then losing it breaks my heart for you. That would have killed me. I found I was pregnant on a Sunday and was losing the baby the following week.
I just wanted to let you know I know how you feel. Your poem is absolutely beautiful. I believe poetry is very theraputic and I hope writing this helped you in some ways to dissolve your loss. God bless you and thanks.
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Re: Tiny Flower
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by LovingWhispers on
Wednesday, 25th June 2003 @ 01:30:21 AM AEST
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| And blossom the darling lil soul did!! In your heart and your soul.Your bub will be with you always.*tears* I want so much to bring some comfort as I too lost a lil one....18 weeks along .Please know that your baby is with wings now and watches over you from above...Love and peace be with you * (((hugs))) |
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Re: Tiny Flower
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 25th June 2003 @ 10:34:24 AM AEST
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I could not even imagine the hurt this envolves. Well I guess to a point I can but in a different way. Im so very sorry for your loss. Your poem presented all your love and pain into one place and it touched my heart!! I cant do much to help you but offer you a huge hug and Im doing it right now.
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Re: Tiny Flower
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th June 2003 @ 02:31:58 PM AEST
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:-'(""" Crying for you! I,too,have lost a child.
I was 8 1/2 months along when mine
stopped getting oxygen,and I was made to carry him for a week until my body naturally
"rejected" him. I can relate to your pain.As my son would have been 20 yrs old last dec.2nd.
and in my heart and soul...he forever dwells!!
Accept my sympathy and prayers....for you,and your tiny flower!!!!!
Beautifully expressed!
Angel always.....godspeed! joni |
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