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Age
Contributed by
ginsdance
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Thursday, 8th August 2002 @ 06:53:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Tears formed like crystal droplets
Gracing the page,
Malforming the writing,
Tarnishing age,
Smearing the ink
As I begin to write
Of sadness and of sorrow
And all of human's plight.
They fall for the heartache
And the other tears shed,
They fall for the brethren,
For family long since dead,
They fall for injustice,
For unsuited pride,
They fall for the sorrow
That has befallen mankind.
Tears formed like ice from the soul,
Slowly tarnishes the page,
And no one counts the tears that fall,
No one, except Age.
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ginsdance
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2002-08-08 06:53:00]
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Re: Age
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by spaceotter on
Thursday, 8th August 2002 @ 12:27:24 PM AEST
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| Lovely Gin!!! Isn't it amazing how much pain can be behind our words? :_( |
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Re: Age
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 06:02:49 PM AEST
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I'm not sure if 'tarnishing' was the right descriptor. Perhaps something more akin to skin-care might prove appropriate. I'm at a loss to exactly what, but you're a lady, and should be able to figure that out more easily than I. ;o)
I liked the ending though.
Quite neat. |
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