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Hungry For Your Love
Contributed by
juliette
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Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 01:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You come to me in dreams of splendor,
Faithfully, do I surrender
Always I wake to the darkness of defeat.
You, never sated by material things-
Know my whole life hangs by a string,
You dangle above me, and yet I am incomplete.
My heart and soul I offer, take all that you need-
But leave me air to breathe,
If what you are feeling does not compare.
Seems I am only so strong as you say,
But I want more than just enough to make me stay-
What little is left over, if you have anything to spare.
I don't want to live without you
This is not the worst I have been through
Almost nothing, is almost good enough.
You know that I will hang around
I don't have the heart to let you down
I am just forever, hungry for your love.
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juliette
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2003-06-24 01:35:00]
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Re: Hungry For Your Love
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 01:59:45 AM AEST
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wonderful poem from start to finish!
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Re: Hungry For Your Love
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by Suzy on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 02:34:53 AM AEST
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I can relate to weak endings because sometimes I start a poem and just don't know how to end it...anyways your poem was wonderful and in this case the ending wasn't really weak...
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