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Across the River Styx He'll Row.
Contributed by
Jessica_Saini
on
Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 10:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Wasting away on his warped bed,
Lays a great man, the family head.
All are awaiting a certain deep sleep,
Slumber so peaceful one has to weep.
Throughout our lives he’s always been strong,
To see him break down has got to be wrong.
Alas this is so, and soon he must go,
Across the river Styx he’ll soon row.
Copyright ©
Jessica_Saini
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2003-06-23 10:45:00]
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Re: Across the River Styx He'll Row.
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by norm on
Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 10:58:33 AM AEST
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You've done a fine job of imagery,,
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You dignify an awful time
you do it well and make it rhyme
sad may be, you make it free
for all to read and join with thee... |
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Re: Across the River Styx He'll Row.
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 01:34:56 PM AEST
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very well written
Shari |
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Re: Across the River Styx He'll Row.
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 09:51:52 PM AEST
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A fine tribute to these two men..
Jenni |
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Re: Across the River Styx He'll Row.
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 03:11:40 AM AEST
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Very nicely written.. Jessica..
this reminds me one of my poems named " the flight of a swan'
thank you friend.. venkat |
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Re: Across the River Styx He'll Row.
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 26th June 2003 @ 02:22:57 AM AEST
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| A very nice tribute to them,I'm sure they would have loved this! Christina |
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