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Equanimity
Contributed by
Saira
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Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 04:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Their diabolic provocations,
To incur my frustration,
Crave to devour the venom in me,
Fail to fathom, how fatal it would be?
Never they spare me in any case,
Hell-bent to chain me up to face.
I fully believe in tit for tat,
But prefer to forgive and forget.
So never will I let them to espy my rage,
They will be lost in this intricate maze.
My equanimity will hurl them in hell,
Of their transgression, time will only tell.
Copyright ©
Saira
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2003-06-23 04:45:00]
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Re: Equanimity
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by venkat on
Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 05:37:46 AM AEST
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| Brief and exquisite.. venkat |
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Re: Equanimity
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by Saira on
Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 09:26:09 AM AEST
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| Thank you Venkat. |
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Re: Equanimity
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 01:53:27 PM AEST
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very well written
Shari |
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Re: Equanimity
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by full_blur on
Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 02:02:42 PM AEST
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Very powerful.
I especially love the first stanza, it is a great collage of harsh actions and reactions phrased perfectly. |
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Re: Equanimity
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by Saira on
Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 03:43:10 PM AEST
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| Thank you my friend. |
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Re: Equanimity
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by Saira on
Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 03:46:24 PM AEST
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| Yes, got a little bitter. Thank you my friend for your kind remarks. |
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Re: Equanimity
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 04:11:35 PM AEST
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excellent poem, wonderful message in it hope every 1 follows it.
keep up the good work.
from u know who :P
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Re: Equanimity
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by Saira on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 08:39:36 AM AEST
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| Thanks buddy! :-> |
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Re: Equanimity
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th June 2003 @ 05:23:37 PM AEST
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your writting is getting excellent.i love the way you elaborate the feelings in ur poems.good going girl!.
Nida |
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Re: Equanimity
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by Saira on
Wednesday, 25th June 2003 @ 05:41:44 PM AEST
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| Thanks Nida for the encouraging words. I'm just trying to be better. |
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Re: Equanimity
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by Jarmen_Kell on
Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 10:38:43 PM AEST
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| YEAH I know what you're feeling right now. But all I can say is, hang in there! if you know you are righteous you will surely prevail. |
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Re: Equanimity
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by Saira on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 01:34:22 PM AEST
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| Thanks for your concern Jarmen_Kell. |
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Re: Equanimity
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by Qohinoor on
Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 04:31:33 AM AEST
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"As an elephant endures the arrows of the battlefield, so will I endure the insults of others"
- Buddha |
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